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Wow Ciara, I am really impressed with the similes and adverbs you used throughout your writing. A next step could be to check your punctuation, sometimes here you have used a comma a full stop should have been used.
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Wow Ciara, I am really impressed with the similes and adverbs you used throughout your writing. A next step could be to check your punctuation, sometimes here you have used a comma a full stop should have been used.
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