This week for writing we were learning to write punchy sentences.
I found it tricky to send it to Mrs naden.
next time i could make the background suit the poem more.
I enjoyed making the canva
Wednesday 4 March 2020
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Very imaginative sentences Ciara, it must be challenging to try and write poetically which is so different to how we would say a sentence. I love how this sounds when you read it. Ka mau te wehi!
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